All of a sudden I realise that the book is too linear. It goes from A to B to C to D, Sunday to Monday to Tuesday to Wednesday, two o'clock to three o'clock to four to five. That wasn't the intention, no no no. And then the distance one feels with the characters. It focuses too much on Damien (yes, a name at last!) but the thing is not to make one stand out too much. Everyone is a main character in some way and then no one is the main character. What crazy ideas, coming from a budding writer! Before this is over I will have thrown ten jotter books into the bin, I am sure.
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